• Gideon Burton

I suspect my editor has been spending too much time on Wikipedia. These are her comments on a story I recently turned in for the Reader:

—These edits in a nutshell: This was nominated as a good article but did not meet the good article criteria. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated.

—This section may be too long or excessively detailed. Please make it as concise as possible but no more concise.

—This phrase is unclear. Please disambiguate.